Looking for Guidance on Script

A couple days into cold calling for med supps and would like some input from those doing telesales. My scipt is:

"Hey ___. This is ___ from ____. I'm giving you a courtesy call because you're a Medicare recipient and wanted to know if you'd be interested in s free quote to see if I can lower your monthly premium."

Thoughts? What would you add? Subtract? Tweak? I'm open to suggestions/help.

Thanks.

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